Monday, January 23, 2006

So long...

ok folks,many Thanks for post-requests but ....
I'm on this travel spree and as busy ,with the new project, as a mother is with her new-born.

Herez a short 55er which I'd written sometime back and I shall promise to be back after a brief hiatus.

Was it his hazel eyes??

He had hazel eyes -'just like mine' ,she thought.
Suddenly he looked deep into her eyes and gave
her a smile, which lit up her world.
She had always longed for someone like him
- the twinkle in his eye, the soft skin and
the immaculate smile-
He was just like the son she never had...

23 comments:

RT said...

Wow.. I am first for a change :-)
Travelling and all. That sounds like a fun time you are having. Mahableshwar notwithstanding.
Nice story. Guess you are taking the mother-new-born-thing rather seriously..;-)

Pallavi said...

hey there .. hope to see you soon :)

Sujit said...

that was nice...

Seashells said...

kahani mein slight twist was nice... good 'un :)

Shankari said...

Ooooo! a great 55-er!
Have fun on your travels.

Rohan Kumar said...

Neat, somebody's all hung up on the 55er it seems :)

zombiee said...

beautiful... succulent...

Anonymous said...

Long time not visited your blog.. Itz gr8 as usual.. what isnt usual is a change in your snap.. this one's even better..

Regards

Swathi said...

@rt
great to see u first on the comments.yaa i jus landed in Brussels where i wud b stationed for the next couple of months.
n jus taking time to settle down.

@pallavi
yaa a few more days n i'm going to blog about brussels till u all get bored.

@sujit
thanks for the kind appreciation

@seashells
luks like ur first time here, welcome to my realm :) and hope to see more of u

@Shankari
thanks and yaa i'm gonna write a lot 'bout my fun travels

@Rohan
jus to get the blog going i wrote a simple 55er...guess tatz what is called a stop-gap arrangement

@zombiee
Thanks dude

@anonymous
is tat Manish??

Seashells said...

Nope not my first time... went by "Shank" in the antediluvian times... :D

cherubic_chipmunk said...

oh wow beautiful way u've ended de 55er n made it unlike de run of de mill crap...so howz u?

Twilight Fairy said...

enjoy ur trip!

and BTW I went to the lotus temple for the first time that day.. :)

gvenum said...

The "So" in the So long is hardly 2 letters, you seem to take 2 years to write a next post.

Twilight Fairy said...

Have you started another blog? Would like to see how different Belgium is from Finland :)

Anonymous said...

tmr

Swathi said...

ok folks (esp. since the anonymous commentors seem to be on the prowl) here comes my next post...

@seashells
so u seem to have got urself re-christened?

@c_c
me doing fine, thank u.

@twilight fairy
nope i havent yet started a belgium blog, gonna use this one only.

@gvenum
Patience ,I believe ,is passion tamed :)

rapunzel said...

and now YOU've disappeared!

Arunima said...

take care and come back soon.

cherubic_chipmunk said...

THOU ART TAGGED!! chk my blog for details hey i kno u've a really hectic schedule so take ur time but plz complete it...ciap soon

Swathi said...

hey c_c
i noticed this tag doing the rounds, but ya i need time :)

VirginUpdates said...

wow.nice writing

jac said...

That was cute, hazel eyed lady!!

Congrats here too.

kiran kumar said...

hai swathi i am sasi kiran kumar frommANDHRA PRADESH I A CURRENTLY WRITING A NOVEL AN i need some one to translate it in to the live english can u arrangge me some one like that